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Joseph

Joseph

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Join date : 2008-07-15

PostSubject: Joseph Slater.   Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:19 pm

Name: Joseph Slater.

Age: 23.

Gender: Male.

Race: Human.

Looks: Joseph has quite pale skin due to the fact that he heavily dislikes the sun and daylight. Joseph has blue eyes that would resemble the colour of a clear blue ocean. His hair is a pale silver colour, this could possibly be because of his resistance to the sunlight in general. Joseph is seen mostly wearing a leather trenchcoat and steel capped leather boots, complete with flame retarded gloves.

City: Dystopia.

Elements: Fire & Electricity.

Alliance: Neutral.

Personality: Joseph is a quite hostile person towards new people, all he really cares about is his own safety and life. Joseph has known to be quite friendly with those he can associate with and shares characteristics with, this has been on incredibly rare occasions however.

Good Traits: Joseph is quite skilled at crafting his fire manipulation spells into new and original attacks, each one more powerful than the last.

Bad Traits: Due to the fire the surges within him, Joseph is quite weak against water. Water phases him to violent extents, too much water can kill him.

Weapons: Joseph only uses is powers.

History: In the present year the world was yet to hear or know of a man named Joseph Slater, until now, a man who, equipped with his fire abilities set his sights to protect all those and that he cared of. The feelings of protection phased him at a young age when his mother died of cancer when he was only 6, he felt helpless in the sense that he felt he could have prevented it. Onward from that day Joseph swore to forever protect those who need it, and only them.

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Black Knight

Black Knight

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Join date : 2008-07-07

PostSubject: Re: Joseph Slater.   Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:08 pm

If it isn't too much trouble could you just maybe make the history a tad bit longer? Just seems kinda short to me, but if you can't crank out anymore then ok. Just I am going to let someone else approve it if it is already ok.

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Bakura

Bakura

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Join date : 2008-07-07

PostSubject: Re: Joseph Slater.   Fri Jul 18, 2008 9:34 am

I agree with Black Knight, a bit longer would be nice.

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